Poster Plan

New Trailer Feedback

The concept of the group being watched was not effectively demonstrated and your next filming scenes need to capture that – perhaps shoot through a keyhole or a crack in the door. Does the man in the mask have a history with the group or a motivation for revenge? The piece is on the short side – probably needs 3 more scenes but be careful not to become too linear'

Big reliance on captions – you need to include some voice-overs.
'I felt there was a nice range of shots in the car park – the editing was a little quick which made the scene confusing. That may have been the point.


I am much happier with this feedback in comparison to our old trailer, it is still a working progress; we need to add more scenes and voice overs.

New Trailer - The Man In The Mask