'The first part feels like a music video. Although you include captions and it’s edited in a way that makes meaning. The villan is over-emphasised in relation to the hero. Although the comic element is signified it’s confusing with the music. The girl is poorly introduced. Might be an idea to tell the audience who is starring in the roles at this point. Awful change of sound when the song ends – needs a fade to bridge the edit.
Nice camera work in the ‘we have a situation scene’ I might be tempted to open the piece with that'
I am not pleased with this feedback, it is clear that our trailer was not put together properly therefore the audience could not understand it. We are going to address this problem by looking over it and changing everything that needs to be changed, hopefully our next feedback will be improved.
